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 title: Vision
 description: 
 published: true
-date: 2024-05-25T16:36:46.639Z
+date: 2024-05-25T16:37:52.836Z
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 editor: markdown
 dateCreated: 2024-05-24T19:33:34.890Z
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 This article builds on and clarifies values we have stated elsewhere. In particular, we look into the values on our website and the "solidification" stage of the roadmap (stage 3).
 
-We've written this page because the roadmap is a broad-strokes list. It isn't clear in either vision or measurable deliverables.
+We've written this page because the roadmap is a broad-strokes list. While it contains strands of a vision and a minimum viable product description, it doesn't clarify these fully.
 
 ## What's our vision?